Hello yacolt,

My God, this is disturbing. You left so much open for interpretation and my mind always tends to go to dark places so to me this brings up images of bulimia and destructive behaviors.

Even if it is just someone who is ill or under intestinal distress it is still so very engrossing. I love the form of it. Well done.

The more I read this the more distressed I get. I think it might actually start to cause me to have a stomach ache. Color me amazed, this is a very powerful piece of writing. That last line is so raw and profound it does just leave you empty. Wow! I love it but keep in my I am consider morbid by most people.

Anyway, I think this is an awesome poem. It conveys so much emotional turmoil and despair with very few words. Bravo.

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