Hello saheli,

I have to give you my standard poetry disclaimer which is I know next to nothing about poetry. I can't speak intelligently on style or forms but I can tell you what I like and the impressions I get from reading.

My first impression of this poem was, do you really have thoughts like this? After my second or third reading I have decided that I like this poem very much.

The tongue twisters while at first read may sound silly are actually very profound statements for the most part. The poem is fun but still meaningful. It is lighthearted and made me smile. And I like how are first glance the poem seems frivolous but upon subsequent readings is very complex. It makes the reader stop and think. Bravo.

Thanks for sharing this and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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