Hey lizwriter,

Nothing to pick apart here. I think it's great. I'm hooked and would definitely read more. In fact I find it frustrating that I didn't get to finish reading the newspaper article.

I like the premise of the an old rock band with a history. I am curious to see where this is heading. Is this article going to rehash old wounds? Is it going to heal some? Is there a possible reunion in the future? What about rekindling old flames. There is just a lot of possibilities with this opening.

Overall, I am intrigued and I think this was well written and paced. I'm looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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