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Given: Sep 1, 2011 at 10:29pm
Length: 1,062 Characters |
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Hello lightspeed555,
This is a truly enthralling story because it is so believable. You personalize it so well by setting the scene with the grueling day at work. I think everyone on the planet can relate to that.
I remember something very similar to this happening to me as a teenager while I was relaxing listening to music. I think your mind and body enter into such a state of harmony that you actually become disassociated from your senses and it gives you get the sensation of heightened awareness. Who knows perhaps you really are leaving your body.
Either way it makes for an interesting experience and story. I enjoyed this piece very much. I particularly like the ending. It is awesome how inspirational music can be to us. It really soothes the soul. Thanks for sharing this, I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
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