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Hello Kaelhyn,

What a great first chapter perfect hook a girl with amnesia. It grabbed me right away and just got better and better. I really enjoyed it.

The one thing that gave me pause is how much Summer reminds me of Neytiri from Avatar. That might just be my imagination though. It doesn't detract from the quality of the story at all it just who I picture in my mind as I read it.

As I said great opening. I am hooked and eager to read more. Well done.


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