Hey E.,

Wow, isn't this just the saucy little number. I think you might want to reconsider that 18+ rating. Has Jill reviewed this one yet? I bet it would make her proud.

That being said this is actually uncharacteristically pretty of you. That's to say it reminds me of one of those prissy Gothic stories, or a super sexy Twilight. Major improvement by the way.

That August is really something else. You write her very believable but I don't like her. Even though I feel bad for her and I don't believe she is at fault for her circumstance. I don't care for the way she just gives into it. In other words she doesn't appear at all remorseful.

I like it but not as well as your SK style stuff. As always it is very well written though and I didn't notice any typos or errors.

Okay, going for another...

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **