Hello Creativity5,

The language of your poem and the images it elicits are beautiful. It definitely gives the reader a joyous feeling. Who wouldn't want to dance with Angels? Even the idea of it is lovely.

This is my favorite line:

This line exudes a sense of total relief of worry and care. I love the way it is worded as well, very eloquent. Well done.

My only suggestion would be to try and convey more of what the narrator is feeling not just seeing. You want to try to include all five senses as well. What does he hear, smell, feel, see and even taste?

Overall, I thought your poem was a beautiful accounting of heavenly reward and the peace of afterlife. I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more from you in the future.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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