Hello Winter Wolf Warrior,

I really like this sentiment of this poem and the meaning behind the words. It is so important to nurture your dreams and never give them up.

Also I think the theme of this poem is awesome. I love the idea of dreams giving us the wings to fly. It leads to some beautiful images and language.

The only problem that I have with it is there are a few places where it sounds like you are rhyming just for the sake of rhyming. The words you choose make it sound forced, like the only reason you used that word or phrase was because it rhymed.

Here are some examples:





Overall, I think this poem is very good it just needs a little tweaking and rewording here and there.Then it will easily be a 5 star poem in my opinion. I thought it flowed very nicely. I don't think that is an issue at all.

Thanks for sharing your work and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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