Hello Beatrix,

This is a wonderful piece simply beautiful. You ask about imagery, rhyme and repetition so that is what I will focus my comments on but I also believe the language is lovely.

The imagery is awesome. That is actually my favorite part of the whole poem. The pictures your words bring to mind are vividly clear and beautiful. They are uplifting and inspirational. They just make the reader feel good and tranquil. I love them.

I don't really see any true rhyming pattern but the rhythm is nice and flow of the piece is pleasing. I like it very much.

As for repetition again nothing that jumps out at me. However, the images of a dragonfly and a butterfly are both very similar then you also have a bird and bee that is a lot of small flying creatures if that matters to you. I don't feel it detracts from the overall greatness of the poem though.

I feel you did a wonderful job with this poem. It is truly worthy praise for the Lord's work. Thank you for sharing it and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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