Hello again Winter Wolf,

I don't really understand this poem but I like the concept of the lone wolf. I just wish I knew what exactly is going on. The words convey a lot of action but I don't understand the motivations. It's probably just me.

Please don't take offense to this but it seems to me that the rhyming is forced. Especially the first, fifth and sixth stanzas.

My suggestion to you would be to show the reader more of what the wolf is thinking and feeling and less of what he is physically doing. This is just my opinion of course but I believe poetry is all about conveying emotions through imagery.

I think this poem has a lot of potential it just needs some touching up. I would try to make the feelings and motivations of the lone wolf clearer to the reader and give us more descriptive images.

I hope you find this review somewhat helpful and not overly harsh it is never my intent to offend just to give honest and constructive reviews. Thanks for sharing you work and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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