Hey Stuck,

This is a phenomenal piece of writing. I think it is just this side of brilliant. I love the fact that you don't rush to get to the revelation. Your characters are so rich and colorful in their own right they all deserve their moments in the sun. Your characterization really is extraordinary. I'm jealous.

I loved just watching this story unfold. It is a longer short story (not to some) in my opinion but as I was reading it didn't seem long at all. I never once wanted to rush to the end and I didn't skip a single word. In fact I read some of them more than once hehe. I enjoyed the story that much. Well done.

That reminds me I did find one typo. Here:
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Again, I can't tell you enough how much I liked this story. The characters are so real and well written that I feel their sorrow and frustration. This is truly a bittersweet tale. I have said it before but I still believe it, you are a master of the classic ghost story. Nobody writes them like you do Stuck. Bravo!!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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