Hey dena,

Since there are only four lines there is really not a lot to go on here but I think the sentiment of the poem is very sweet and profound. If I would you I would definitely expound upon the idea by giving the reader examples of how they can meet you halfway or how you can fall in love.

One other thing and I don't mean to sound overly critical but if you are going to write such a short poem with so few words you really need to make sure it is error free to get as good an effect as possible. Here:
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Overall, you have a nice start to a poem now just run with it. Thanks for sharing and I hope to read more from you in the future.

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