Hello Alex Goulart,

Wow, what a horrifying piece of writing. You ask about conveyance of meaning and all I can say is that I have no idea what exactly is going on in this piece but the feeling and atmosphere is coming in loud and clear.

The sense of fear and isolation I gather from reading this is overwhelming and all I can do is feel bad for anyone let alone a child who has experienced this. I find it profoundly sad and disturbing. No one should ever be that alone.

I am giving this piece its rating not for the meaning it convey but for the feelings it conveys which are very poignant. Thank you for sharing it and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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