Hey Linzzy Jane,

This is yet another marvelous poem from you. I am beginning to think you are incapable of writing anything bad.

This is a truly haunting poem. I don't know why but the images of the passing of time and seasons reminds me of a CSI episode or something similar. It is very clear and vivid. I like it very much.

I feel sad for this girl who never receives justice yet time still goes on. You tell this tale beautifully. I admire your ability to convey this horrible act without even a hint of the graphics. Well done.

I only have one question. Is it necessary for the girl to be named Brooke? I'm not really sure what it adds to the poem and I wonder if some readers might find it confusing. It's a minor point I just thought I would mention it.

Overall, I loved this piece just like I have all your poetry. I can't believe thanks to you I'm reading poetry regularly now. That is no small feat mind you. Thanks for sharing as always I look forward to reading more from you soon.


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