Hey Nataly,

This is a very intriguing story. It seems to me to be a part of a much larger epic tale. I get the in the dark feeling from this story like there is more before and after it that I am not privy too.

I am totally enchanted by the monster under the bed character and I would love to read more about it and its background. Why does it change forms when it comes out from under the bed? What is the realm it comes from? Is it an aquatic world or a completely alien dimension?

Then with the introduction of the antagonist I just have more and more questions. Who is this child? What is she chosen for? Who is it trying to kidnap her? Why are they trying to kidnap her? Do all children have these protectors or is it only Victoria?

I just really want to read more. I think this story is great and very well written but it just appears so incomplete to me. Is there more to it? If not are you planning on writing more of it? If so I would definitely read it and recommend it to others. The characters are rich and the story is interesting and suspenseful. Bravo.


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