Hello CaptainDancer,

What a clever dark comedic tale. I loved it. You did a phenomenal job of subverting the nature of Bobby until the last possible moment. Great job.

I loved the bit about him eating the dog. I almost wanted to see him bite the father too. I wonder if that would have changed the mother's feelings about human/zombie relationships.

The pacing was wonderful and I wouldn't change a thing but I genuinely regret not getting to read that dinner conversation. If you ever decide to revise or add to this that is what I suggest just go ahead and write the dinner scene.

Anyway, loved this tale. It was a quick fun ride that made me laugh out loud. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Bravo!


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