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Hey E.,

Wow! Who the hell is this kid? He's like Son of Rambo. I hate being this torn up. I am both dying for the end and dreading it at the same time. I guess it has to come sometime. Poor Eddy.

The driver's side window was rolled down.
P2 S1

I used my shirt to pull open the driver's side door.
P8 S1

I leaned into the well of the driver's side and hunted for the release with the flashlight.
P8 S3

The white car emblem with an open boot trunk stared back at me from beside the clutch.
P8 S4 (I think you mean trunk but maybe not)

Vanished aswas the sobbing mess that had been trying to beg Mack Larson out of writing her a ticket.
P9 S6

Jenna's eyes shootshot towards Mack's direction, then to us; back and forth.

P24 S4

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