Hello Joe,

Damn this is incredibly awesome. I loved every bit of this story. The way you mixed the horror with the erotic is just genius. It is very believable and real. I loved it. I would totally like to see this story made into a movie. It would rock.

The way you describe the ladies of the evening (whole new meaning there hehe) is just fantastic. You set the scene so well this whole story just played out in my mind. This is really one of my favorite pieces of yours Joe. Bravo.

The thought of discovering their true nature during mid-sex act is just so revolting it's chilling. I love it.

One tiny suggestion it may or may not make a difference cause this story is pretty well perfect in my book anyway. I might have the taxi driver cringe visibly or give some other subtle sign that he knows the true nature of the house. Maybe when he drops them off he can imply they are going to get what they deserve or something. I know you had him irate about the speeky enleesh thing but I would foreshadow the upcoming events more. Just a suggestion...

Overall, I think this story is fabulous. In my opinion this is a phenomenal piece of writing and I love every bit of it. I enjoyed it so much and it was a well deserved win. Congratulations.
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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