Hello Confield,

Well what can I say about this piece? It is in my opinion absolutely brilliant. A true masterpiece, to say I love it is a gross understatement. I am in shock of how good it is.

I felt like the contestant as I read this story. I was completely spellbound. I could not stop reading it was so engrossing. What an excellent tale. I guess the eyes really are the windows to the soul after all.

The excitement and intensity you convey through a simple act of staring is amazing. The explanation of what is truly taking place is beyond clever it is downright genius. The unlocking of the memories is so simple but believable again, brilliant is the only word that comes to mind.

I also love the memory worm idea. That is so you. It is the stylish part of your writing that mesmerizes me the most. I am both thrilled and revolted by your dark and visceral outlook on life. Well done.

I don't know what else to say. I can continue to rant and rave about how incredible this piece of writing is but I really don't want to sound like a groupie so I won't. Suffice it to say I love it. I think I like it even better than or at least as well as Feeding the Machine which I never thought I would say.

Only one typo jumped out at me. This:

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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