Hey Confield,

Another beautifully written tale of horror. I love the whole Silent Hill feel of this piece. It is very creepy and slow to boil. The exploration through the hospital just gets scarier and scarier as the tension mounts. I swear by the time we get to the delivery room I was wound tighter than a rubber band.

I have to say I found this story much more visual than emotional. You set the scene and atmosphere fantastically well but I would like to sense a bit more of what the main character is thinking and feeling. I mean when he finds out the true nature of events he takes to them right away. Why is that? Is he an evil man? Does he feel a kinship with the child? Is he possessed? As a reader I would just like a little more insight into his actions.

Overall, great creepy story. As always impeccably well written. I am still your number one fan. Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



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