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Ah, I think I remember those two from... Club Justice, right? And they featured a story or two in this folder, too, if I remember right, where you revealed some things about their strained pasts.

It was nice to see them again. I liked the contrast between them.

He the rough guy, cussing graticiously (inside here), impatient, wild hair and greasy clothes from work. (Good way to show his work for those who haven't come across him yet. She - at first! - the proper, a bit flirty, almost innocent appearing little girlfriend waiting for her guy. The latter quickly changed when she got opportunity to unwrap her birthday gift. *gulps* Sorry, couldn't resist.

What irritated me a little was Reaper's contradictory train of thought before he joined Lee. In the first paragraph he behaves as if she was the most terrible thing to return home to and gives in to his awaiting fate, then in the laundry room this view changes to her being a geisha who fulfills all wishes he might have.

Um, was that simply to show that he doesn't understand girls in general (Lee doesn't seem to be neither the one nor the other), or was he preparing for a roleplay (with her as the geisha)?

Well, what came then was of course very enjoyable and exciting to watch unfold. God, I'm such a bloody little voyeur , but you squeezed an intensity and pleasure into such few words that it was hard (uh, darn!) not to be affected.

Funny was that Reaper was quickly put into place by Lee, that he stood back so she could have her fun. It doesn't bother him too much that she took lead, as he highly benefitted himself. God, she almost knocked him out!

Again, beyond the sex and banter, their closeness showed, especially in the moment after the world spun out of its orbit.

Here's a couple in love, an unusual couple with the girl being the secret boss but letting her biker believe he is to not hurt his Self-image and ego. She's above that. Guess, that's called love.

Hehe, Lee's right. Celebrating one's birthday alone sucks! Great little dirty tale!

Here are a few little things you might like to consider:

1) ... son-of-a-b****ing thing...
2) ... (comma) and smiled.
3) ... frosted door(comma) spurring his lust.
4) Lee turned in his arms the moment he stepped in behind her. => How can she do so when he is barely in? He must close the shower door before he can embrace her.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .