I love your first line: I was only five when my first love came. It makes the reader want to know who is your first love.

As soon as I read it was a puppy, that was your first love. I knew I was in for treat reading your story.
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I am a great lover of animals, so I can totally relate to pets adding so much love and companionship to a home

As I read your poem you remind me of the two cats, that I have Buddy and Mimi and how I could not get along

without them.

I like the way you share your devotion and commitment to Tim, even though he is not the cute cuddly puppy, anymore.

He has still your boy, your grown up boy with those big brown eyes, that started the love relationship from the

beginning.

Also how he has been a loyal and loving companion to you.

Summary: I like the poem's light and airy attitude about the love of two friends The writer and her dog,.
I like the way the writer describes her puppy with big brown eyes. Those eyes!
I enjoyed reading the poem and thought it was a very well written poem.


These are only my opinions and meant to help not to injure the writer