Fantastic work, this short work is well written and unique! I love the way you tied the birds singing into WDC and reviewing, while managing to portray both in a believable light. My only suggestion is to add an 's' to 'hurt' in the third paragraph. Other than that...write on!
Primate.
You responded to this review 12/01/2011 @ 8:24am EST
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