Hello wildtoste, and

Fantastic work! This is a short but well written piece that does the subject matter justice! Your rhyme helps the piece to flow well, and your words paint pictures with their awesomness(yes I did just use that word). My only suggestions are to capitalize the first words of each stanza and end each with a period, even if a person does not like to use them, any poem is sloppy without the basic grammatics learned in high school.