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 Angel Open in new Window. [E]
I dreamed of friend recently passed away and upon waking I wrote this.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Clock2*Fantastic poem! This is a beautiful tribute to a departed friend, she mostly likely would cry could she see this... Your rhyme is good, keeping the flow moving except for in the last two paragraphs, those words do not work. And grammatics are good, except that you need to add a comma or semi-colon after 'wings' in the third line of the first stanza. Otherwise, Great work!

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