Great work! This story is fantastic, you set a mood appropriate to the subject matter from the beginning, and keep it going all the way to the end. Your POV is suitable to the piece, and your grammatics are fine as well. The plot is great, I assume in writing this you had a certain number of words to abide by, if so, well done, if not, well done! Other than that, I have nothing left to say other than...good work!
Primate.
You responded to this review 12/01/2011 @ 8:27am EST
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