Hello maggie , and

Great work! This little poem is simple and easily understood in its message, proving that little things can... Your rhyme scheme works well except for stanza 4, and while on that stanza, you might want to take a look at the way things are arranged, it's a little awkward in more ways than the rhyme. I believe that this piece would look better if you chose to center and italicise it! Grammatics are good for the most part, except for in the second and last stanzas, where you need to end the first line with a semi-colon and the second with a ' - '. Otherwise...Fantastic!