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*Leaf2*Great work! This simple poem chronicles just 'another day at the office' in a manner that is fun to read. This poem flows well, really rolling off of the tongue!*Smile*Though you could use some punctuation, such as a semi-colon at the end of line two, commas at the ends of three and four, and a period after five, end six and seven with commas, finishing off line eight with a period. Other than that...Woo hoo!*Bigsmile*

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