Great work! After reading your "Vegetarian" fify-five word story, I had to find another one to see if it was as good as the other. And, I am not disappointed! This is, if anything, even better than the last one, once again you have proven your mastery of the fifty-five word short story! And once again, I see nothing that needs correcting in this piece. Write on!
Primate.
You responded to this review 12/03/2011 @ 12:44am EST
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