Hello salliemoffitt, and

Another great story! I have become intrigued with all of the very short stories that I have been reading, and may well try to create a fantastic one like the pieces I have reviewed! This is another well plotted story that has no grammar errors as far as I am concerned. My only advice is to perhaps lengthen this out a little bit and add some more depth, unless you were following a specific word count, in which case it might help to list it. But otherwise, write on!