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Given: Dec 1, 2011 at 12:16pm
Length: 648 Characters |
546 w/o WritingML
A beautiful piece!You rythm is very good. This is the type of poem where the words really speak to the person and you can see these things happening as you read it. I especially like the part 'Stars are living and dying as the ages pass by. Planents are formed, inhabited and destroyed as still progress marches ahead'. Those words are simply beautiful!
Grammer Errors: I see none.
Rating: This deserves a five!
Overall Impression: A captivating piece!
Keep writing and keep posting!
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