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*Xmastree*The second piece of yours that I have read and you have yet do disappoint me. This piece is fascinating! The words are captivating, you draw the reader in and leave them wanting more. I especially like how you have seperated the poem into the parts, like there is a beginning and then you see it happen and then an end where everything is peaceful again! *Xmastree*


*Xmastree*Grammer Errors: I see none.
Overall Impression: A delightful read!
Rating: This deserves a five!
Keep writing and keep posting!
This has been Angel signing off!*Xmastree*
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