First Response: Sad, fearful of still retaining hope for the possibility of being hurt that accompanies it.

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Spelling and Grammar: Good except periods.

Good Points: Articulated message and tone

Suggestions: The tone of the poem seems to be intented to be hopeless and crushed. But the ending counteracts that by saying "by my worthlessness, my stupidity, my hope has yet to unwind". This contradicts the entire tone, and the worthlessness and stupidity would seem to cause the absence of hope, or for it to unwind. It'd be more accurate to say "by the worthlessness, my stupidity, my hope is about to unwind", or "Despite my worthlessness, my stupidity, my hope has yet to unwind", to keep it from being paradoxal in nature.

Overall: Solid intention and foundation, would like to hear longer pieces or other work from the writer!