First Response: I like it, good solid tone and presentation.

Characters: Narration is strong and forthright.

Spelling and Grammar: "This is where my thoughts unite from the unconcious, through quick fingertips" should have a period at the end.
"unconcious" should be "unconscious".
"depths of anothers psyche. " should be "depths of anothers' psyche."

Good Points:
"People write poetry in hopes to be understood-
for tightly wrapped metaphors to unveil secrets inside-
but we can’t see into dreamy depths of anothers psyche,
because all that we see are reflections of ourselves." Well written, emotionally compelling, and solidly structured! I love this paragraph.

Suggestions: Punctuate after every line! Watch little spelling errors..

Overall: Really, really liked this piece. It resonated with me rather deeply. Glad I got to read it, thank you!