First response: Strong foundation and structure, well written and articulated.
Characters: Descriptive, and the narrative is enchanting and illuminating.
Spelling and Grammar: tundra does not need to be capitalized, neither does northerners.
Good Points: Well thought out and executed. Exemplary writing unique but concrete.
Suggestions: Lengthen and add more depth, descriptions, and imagery.
Overall: A good piece of writing, which could be considerably improved from minuet and easy changes.

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