First response: Good piece with a good basis, foundation.
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Spelling and Grammar: Grammar and punctuation seem mostly accurate. "get together
because I miss you. " should have a comma after together.
Good Points: Really like the line "I've come to realize that I can love you, and that I do.". I love the point that it is real, whether it lasts or fades and either way you get to enjoy it now so what does it matter. Very mature and conceptualized thought. Very impressive.
Suggestions: Maybe rework the writing a little bit, make it more engrossing.
Overall: A surprisingly subtle yet profound piece that could become one of the better works with a little revision. Good job!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .