First response: Well written, artistic, showing a good vocabulary and arrangement.
Characters: N/A
Spelling and Grammar: Consider watching for run on sentences and make sure to properly punctuate things.
Good Points: I really like the last, "I find the strength to fall", it's a great literary device.
Suggestions: Be more detailed and add more of an emotional emphasis to the piece.
Overall: A good start for what can become an amazing piece! Thank you for posting.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .