Hello! Remember, this review is only my opinion and you do not have to change anything. All I ask is that you take a minute to read it and consider the things that I am suggesting.

Rhyme: The rhyme isn't important, but In my opinion it helps the poem flow better. You did a good job on the rhyme.

Meter: The meter was good. I wouldn't change anything.

Word Choice: I have noticed that on your poems your word choice is VERY good - as this poem is.

Title: The title fits the poem very nicely.

Brief Description: I agree, it was kind of sad. Maybe say, My hope for the New Year (kind of sad). Kinda isn't a word, and you should capitalize 'new year'.

Emotion: This made me feel like whatever I do and ask, I will never find an answer to what I want.

Emoticon: I belive this is a pretty good one.

Star Rating From One To Five: {e:Star

This was a fun poem to read, and I truly hope that you continue. Everyone makes mistakes. You have a true talent. Never let anyone tell you that you cannot do it, because anyone cane if they really try.