Review of showering acts of joy



Why I chose this piece Newbie review. Like history and non fiction

Overall impression of piece: This is a wonder how these things get started type of piece. I like history and have never even heard of this. Your story is both logical and and with the interpersonal attributes described, quite within understanding

Grammatical and spelling errors,-- seems a bit much. I would drop the comma

What I liked?: I love the detail you put into this. It makes the story. I appreciate the back story. Could perhaps have used even a little more. Details on building a 50 meter tower might help

What I disliked: I am not sure where you are from but word usage is a little different. Doddle I had to google. Stuff up a business is generally not known to everyone. This is an interesting story but the issue for me would be, so what? I think we have more complex reasons to hack today. I think some of them might be just for boredom. How much money is spent on anti-hacking tools? It has to be considerable. Samuel Morse was the first inventor. I am not sure how he fits in

How the piece made me feel: This was pretty good. It certainly increased my knowledge base. Thanks for sharing

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.

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