Review of showering acts of joy



Why I chose this piece Trolling essays and like the concept.

Overall impression of piece: This is funny and pretty realistic. Oh the things we get ourselves into. Is there guilt by association? Being married can be a magical mystery tour.

Grammatical and spelling errors: Ill-prepared with a hyphen

What I liked? We think we are so refined, but the truth is we haven't been differentiated as men and women all that long. There are intense throw backs. I think high blood pressure is one of these. If we had a few saber tooth tigers, things would be different. Fights with other females is one of those things. Lionesses definitely have a pecking order. I like that Jesus is central to your identity. He can't just be glued on. People know.

What I disliked: coclusion is kind of weak. I guess I am pretty regular. Most of the to thine own self be true refers back to Laertes in Hamlet and he was kind of a pompous old wind bag. I think people do knowee what you think about yourself. If you are unsure, you can be picked on.

How the piece made me feelI don't have to give up being me to be with you. People find that refreshing. there are few originals

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.

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Peace and beauty in freefall
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