Review of showering acts of joy



Why I chose this piece Like articles; new member review. Welcome to WDC

Overall impression of piece: This seems to wonder around the concept of what is creativity. What can I learn? Who is Nathan? I think it is worth the gamble

Grammatical and spelling errors. Your asterics about analyzing Hemingway are kind of distracting. I would take us through your process step by step. Always use complete sentences

What I liked?: Sarah as a calculus expression. That is innovative. I am afraid I never came close to that. You make this down home and personal. Reading French fries and laying with a significant other. I like you don't have a tried and true method of how this works. Creativity is based on failure as well as success

What I disliked: one of my streams--I have no idea. Never really say who Sarah is. Seems to be a disconnect to me. It seems that you kind of wander through some things at first without saying why you are writing. I think you have been to the places in creativity that a lot of us have.

How the piece made me feel No one has all the answers. I like that about this piece. I think the impetus of this piece is to have people bond towards you. You did a lot of good and interesting things. Don't be afraid to be you.

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.

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