Review of showering acts of joy



Why I chose this piece I like non fiction; newbie review

Overall impression of piece: I like to think. I thought I would go through this with you and tell you what I think. Obviously I don't see the world as you do and that is ok. Read your bio and it is quite impressive. I definitely get your point of view and know where you are coming from

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems intact

What I liked?: Not to make a decision is indeed a decision. I think that is how we got from the Civil war to black violence of the 60"s

What I disliked: I may be isolated as a white person, but I don't get this. You have a lot of rhetoric in here, but very few particulars and facts. I can't fix my innuendos. This is a call to action but the action is not really defined If you want us to admit a problem, you have to be specific about the problem. One of the ways you can do that is to take arguments like I am not racist because and give pertinent negatives from your point of view

How the piece made me feel: I myself feel reasonably colorblind. We have a lot of very dark people here in Idaho as a refuge center. If anything, I am drawn to them. I can't imagine what their life was like and how difficult it is. In fact we have a lot of nationalities here. I think it makes us better. People still have a large issue with hispanics in our community. What is generous versus giving away the store?

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.

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