Review of showering acts of joy



Why I chose this piece Trolling through articles. Like non-fiction. Who can not want to hear about this? Newbie review

Overall impression of piece I really like the ideas in this. I think they are right on. We are created in the image of God but then advertising says we should be something else. We should be shallow and buy a ferrari. My 99 chevy does just fine

Grammatical and spelling errors First sentences isn't a sentence. Second dash is just a hyphen. Last paragraph has a hyphen instead of a dash. I would consider using less dashes. Kind of makes things too choppy


What I liked? How happy are you? I have little money,,but even then I have just about anything anyone else has. I like the complaining to God. People do th at. he just said he would take care of our needs. He is faithful. Learning to wait is hard in an era of instant gratification . We can have it all...now. We have 8$ of the population and consume 50% of the resources. How long can that keep happening?

What I disliked As you sow, so shall you reap is also biblical. I wouldn't put that as child stories. Transform our world through spiritual endeavors needs specifics. I think that is what the piece is about. I would say love people. The world is about relationships

How the piece made me feel You are preaching to the choir on this one. I agree with you implicidly. Maybe you need to use arguments against those who would disagree. Is America the happiest country? There are statistics and we are not.

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.

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