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What I liked: I liked all of it! This poem was beautiful! Your descriptions were wonderful, and I could feel the adoration and love of the speaker in your poem.
What needs improvement:
Nothing. This poem on love was wonderful!
Food for thought: Thank you so much for sharing this poem. You were able to express the love so well. I really enjoyed reading this! Good job!
And Happy WDC Anniversary from Showering Acts of Joy!
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