Review of showering acts of joy



Why I chose this piece I am a Quaker. I am over 60.

Overall impression of piece: You are very observant. In silent meetings, there is no specific priest or min ister.. Sometimes it is over an hour of silence. Most quaker meeting are like main line protestents

Grammatical and spelling errors Quaker, proper name in caps. Forty spelled out

What I liked? I really like the conclusions of this. We are all weird. God shouldn't have chosen people to run the show, but he did.

What I disliked Really need help with how this is on the page. I would put a line in between paragraphs. To do that, you must enable line spacing. Could indent, but I find that cumbersome. Quakers have a proud tradition of running their meetings by listening to the voice of God. That is who teaches in the meetings. Some do this better then others. When they conduct buisiness, all must be in agreement. We do not vote on anything. A minority view can be the right one. The antislavery movement in the US started in the Quaker church, and spread church by church. True Quakers have christian beliefs. Some fringe elements would say they believed in the inner light which could mean about anything

How the piece made me feel Maybe you didn't ask enough questions. Ask if you have any more issues.

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