I was pretty much with you until that final line. Goodness, that was a decided turn of thought. You aren't th first to suggest that God plays no active role in our lives, that he created us and just observes, but it is encouraging that there are people questioning and wondering about life.

I liked the poem's first eleven lines, and then it seemed to lose objectivity with that last angst filled proclamation.

Of course I can understand the feeling. There is so much that goes on sometimes, and so many people trying to tell us what to do, how to be, and then we see all the other chaos that people create, it's easy to look part all the wonderful things that people do.

I did like the poem, though I would have preferred a more philosophical last line.