THIS IS A GREAT PIECE of WORK! Up until the very last two sentences, I thought you had made it, but then you were so good, and the need so great, you had to be dinner or burned at the stake!

A vampire dentist. Now that is a good one. Very well written. The ryhming is also very well done. I truly enjoyed the poem even though I didn't think I wanted to read it. One of my residents wrote a book about "The Vampire and the Vegan." I also thought I would not like it, but it was an excellent book.

Good job! Write on.