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First congratulations on your first post on Writing.com. Second, welcome to the site! I hope you find the place helpful and a of of fun. It wasn't long ago

I always liked the siren myth, whether the traditional Greek myth or some of the more creative symbols like those used in the movie, "O'Brother Where Art Thou."

This poem captures the mood of the siren, illustrating its enticing call, setting themselves up as beacons for humans. The second couplet intensifies that mood, so that readers can sense the fear and trepidation. Though I must admit, I've no idea what you mean by, "biped bodies" unless of course you mean, "man." In which case, I'd change that.

The third couplet captures the scene as the siren emerges from the mist, at this point, anyone within earshot is likely lost.

The last couplet is interesting, as it suggests the closer a person gets, the uglier the siren becomes, and yet they are still attracted by the siren's call, so it's the song that it irresistible I suppose.

I think it's a worthy first effort. It's a hard subject to write about, which certainly accounts for the occasional vagueness. But over-all, I think it's pretty good.