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You have reviewed several items on my port, and I wanted to drop by and
reciprocate.


Plot and Emotional Impact:
This story was solid from start to finish. The girl was easy to identify with. I found her real, likeable, and a little bit like me. Her desire for freedom was instilled in her. Her envy watching the freedom of her brothers and the rules for her differed than the rules for them. She longed for their freedoms.

This piece made me feel like I wanted to experience true freedom. She found what she thought she wanted and realized it wasn't what she expected. Often we all think we want something and discover we didn't want it after all. She looked into the face of the wild horse and empathized with him.


Characters:
I like her and her love for creatures and wild horses. I loved her independent spirit and adventurous quality. She too needed taming.


What I liked:
You had a steady progression with descriptions, setting, and plot. You didn't overdo anything. It was just the right amount of information at the right time. You absolutely nailed this.


Suggestions:
I have no suggestions to make. It was a wonderful read.

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