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Emotional Impact:
You have a knack for lyrics. How I wish I could hear how this sounds put to music. This is a sad piece. You have me thinking about the impact of the death of a loved one. The way you approach this is very original, looking at it from the past like the hands of a clock. I see the plane, and I know what is happening to the family involved.


What I liked:
I wish I had suggestions, but I don't hear the actual piece put to music, so it is hard. All I can say is that you have a gift for bringing out questions and many diverse ways to interpret an ending. You leave the reader to choose. In this case, I see the family and feel their pain. I see the person, who is in that place, and wonder if they understand it. Do they see the significance of what is happening, or the impact it will have on those they love? Do they understand they are not the only ones in pain? Most people don't.

Fabulous lyrics! Keep up the great job!

You responded to this review 07/27/2012 @ 12:48am EDT

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